I did this exercise
before and I talked about a holiday I had with my boyfriend and his family in
the south of Argentina, so for this blog entry I’m going to talk about a
holiday I had with my family two or three years ago (I don’t remember exactly
when it was).
We went to
Valparaíso by bus and we stayed there for one week. It was special for us
because we hadn’t one week of vacations in years! Normally, we go to the beach
for one or two days.
We stayed in a guesthouse. I liked it a lot because we
were five persons and the house was big enough for us. The beach was ten
minutes from the place we were staying and we didn’t need a car to get there,
we could walk to beach, so we didn’t spend money in transportation, at least
that we wanted to go anywhere else.
We went to
La Sebastiana, one of the Neruda’s houses. I’m not a big fan of Neruda,
actually I hate him, but I like to visit cultural places. La Sebastiana is like
all of his houses. It has a lot of weird things –Neruda was very strange-, most
of them related to the sea. The bad thing about it is that is hard to get
there. You need to take a bus and the trip takes half an hour or more.
We ate sea
food. I like sea food, specially fish. We went to El Mercado of Valparaíso – I
didn’t translate it as “market” because obviously is more than a market, you
can eat Chilean food there and buy fresh vegetables-. I ate fried merluza and
rice. We had mote con huesillo then. Once we finished a musician started to
play for us.
We went
back to Santiago by bus again.
Hi Katherine :) when you said "...because we hadn’t one week of vacations in years!" maybe it could say "...we hadn't have one week...". I dont think that the first way was wrong i just thought that it could be more clear but im not sure of what you wanted to say. I hope you're fine, regards!!
ReplyDeleteHi Katherine! Your writing is good and it was easy to understand your story :) I think the same than Dominique, that part of the text was a little confusing, you should look over it :)
ReplyDeleteSee you! :)
hi katherine, I like your post, the experience that you describe is very familiar with almost all of us.
ReplyDeleteking regards
Katherine:
ReplyDeleteWC: 298. Very good! Nice to hear that you enjoyed Valparaíso, I like it so much!
Just some minor things for you to check:
…we hadn’t HAD one week of vacations in years!
we could walk to THE beach, so we didn’t spend money (in) ON transportation, (at least that) UNLESS we wanted to …
… obviously IT is more than a market
Cheers,